tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8172600040007166978.post1023157438311694507..comments2023-09-06T10:36:17.025-04:00Comments on Wilderness Fandango: The April PoemUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8172600040007166978.post-20221325921863850412010-05-03T21:23:43.112-04:002010-05-03T21:23:43.112-04:00Once a month isn't enough. This was lovely; I...Once a month isn't enough. This was lovely; I want more...Diane Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03379544317007203762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8172600040007166978.post-44833202899569114792010-05-02T04:49:23.308-04:002010-05-02T04:49:23.308-04:00Nancy left a note on her blog to 'look inside&...Nancy left a note on her blog to 'look inside'. I'm so glad you did. Your imagery and words are powerful.Louise Gallagherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13522775693728655487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8172600040007166978.post-12696473089435679042010-05-01T13:25:03.483-04:002010-05-01T13:25:03.483-04:00Also came over from Nancy's place.
I think i...Also came over from Nancy's place.<br /><br />I think it's marvelous you're trying out poetry. Everyone should. <br /><br />I like especially your image of a "stumbling" heart, the crows' "fringing the view with slashes of black" and "brooding nervously like disdainful mourners" (that "disdainful" is unexpected).<br /><br />You are a very good observer, and so create some strong imagery here.<br /><br />Will look forward to seeing more from you.Maureenhttp://writingwithoutpaper.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8172600040007166978.post-85988839651572392152010-05-01T12:35:57.193-04:002010-05-01T12:35:57.193-04:00found you via Nancy ... you've aptly described...found you via Nancy ... you've aptly described those crowsS. Etolehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01847206680320012887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8172600040007166978.post-29074847128632474902010-05-01T11:33:09.094-04:002010-05-01T11:33:09.094-04:00words
of birds
and the flight
of a hopeful
heart
...words<br />of birds<br />and the flight<br />of a hopeful <br />heart<br />on wings<br />brings a smile <br />to mineAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com